A Beautiful Home

They say a house is not a home until it is filled with the laughter and noise of the family living in it. The house I grew up in was just a simple wooden house. It had all the basics that made it a house such as the rooms and furniture. I remember that my favorite room in the house was the kitchen.

The kitchen for me is what made my family house a beautiful home. I remember how the kitchen always smelled of a mixture of brewed coffee and bacon first thing in the morning. I did not need an alarm clock during those summer months out of school.

The freshly cooked bacon and smell of hot bread coming out of the oven always got everyone out of bed early. I would always be the first of my siblings in the kitchen, ready and willing to set the breakfast table. As the family sat gathered around to eat, we would tell stories about how we planned to spend the day.

After the meal, our father would line us up by the door before he left and give us our candy money for the day. He was a kind man my father. He always smelled like soap and coffee even hours after the meal.

My house is a beautiful home. It has everything that is expected. I have a loving father, a responsible mother, and siblings who I continue to grow with to adulthood. What more can I ask for?

Questions and Answers:

What was your dominant impression?

The dominant impression I wanted to capture in this paper is the early memory of my childhood and those simple times when my family shared everything we did together. I also wanted to give the reader a vivid description of how my family was and the simple joys we shared like having an early morning breakfast.

Weakness in my assignment?

I wish I had a higher allowable word count so that I could be more descriptive and further enhance the use of the 5 senses of my reader as my narration progresses. I also think that I have a problem in the subject verb agreement in a portion of the essay.

Strengths in my assignment I am proud of?

I am proud of the way I was able to relate a simple childhood experience and enhance it into a wonderful memory of the home I grew up in for whoever might read my essay.

Calculate the price
Make an order in advance and get the best price
Pages (550 words)
$0.00
*Price with a welcome 15% discount applied.
Pro tip: If you want to save more money and pay the lowest price, you need to set a more extended deadline.
We know how difficult it is to be a student these days. That's why our prices are one of the most affordable on the market, and there are no hidden fees.

Instead, we offer bonuses, discounts, and free services to make your experience outstanding.
How it works
Receive a 100% original paper that will pass Turnitin from a top essay writing service
step 1
Upload your instructions
Fill out the order form and provide paper details. You can even attach screenshots or add additional instructions later. If something is not clear or missing, the writer will contact you for clarification.
Pro service tips
How to get the most out of your experience with MyhomeworkGeeks
One writer throughout the entire course
If you like the writer, you can hire them again. Just copy & paste their ID on the order form ("Preferred Writer's ID" field). This way, your vocabulary will be uniform, and the writer will be aware of your needs.
The same paper from different writers
You can order essay or any other work from two different writers to choose the best one or give another version to a friend. This can be done through the add-on "Same paper from another writer."
Copy of sources used by the writer
Our college essay writers work with ScienceDirect and other databases. They can send you articles or materials used in PDF or through screenshots. Just tick the "Copy of sources" field on the order form.
Testimonials
See why 20k+ students have chosen us as their sole writing assistance provider
Check out the latest reviews and opinions submitted by real customers worldwide and make an informed decision.

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
Thanks. This helps a lot. Was a bit late but some cushion was given.
Customer 0, February 10th, 2022

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
Thank you. No issues
Customer 0, April 17th, 2022

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
On time and as always a great service! This semester has been very time consuming a tough for my family so this service has not only been a life saver but helped me keep up my grades! If you are in a time crunch or need help, don't hesitate! They are worth it!
Customer 0, April 4th, 2022

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
THANK YOUUUUU
Customer 0, March 18th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
Don't really see any of sources I provided, but elsewise its great, thank you!
Customer 0, May 8th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
The writer was timely and proficient. I had to ask for a revision, but I got it back quickly with no other issues. Would use this essay writing service again
Customer 0, November 14th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
great summery in terms of the time given. it lacks a bit of clarity but otherwise perfect.
Customer 0, June 9th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
IThank you
Customer 0, April 6th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
Paper much better compared to the one prior revision request. References need to be no more than the past 5 years.
Customer 0, July 20th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
It was gotten well after time I needed to make needed additions, but it is something that did help me. I could not get the concept of ho to start such a project but now reading this, I was over thinking the project it seems.
Customer 0, July 19th, 2021

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
Thank you so much for your help! :)
Customer 0, May 11th, 2022

Notice: Array to string conversion in /home/myhomeworkgeeks/myhomeworkgeeks.com/wp-content/themes/proxim-canyon/widgets/reviews.php on line 18
Array
It was my first time using such a service. Essay was good and nicely formatted.
Customer 0, February 16th, 2022
11,595
Customer reviews in total
96%
Current satisfaction rate
3 pages
Average paper length
37%
Customers referred by a friend
OUR GIFT TO YOU
15% OFF your first order
Use a coupon FIRST15 and enjoy expert help with any task at the most affordable price.
Claim my 15% OFF Order in Chat
Live ChatWhatsApp

Are You Looking For Assignment Help? We Can Certainly Assist You