Please review the attached emails and make the following changes: Email #1 ? Specify the type of…
Please review the attached emails and make the following changes:
Email #1
? Specify the type of meeting in the subject line.
? Specify in the message the type and purpose of the meeting, where it will be held, the names of attendees, and how long it will last. ? Give the recipient a deadline for responding regarding his or her attendance.
? Delete “Should be a blast!” It is too casual. Email 5-8e
? Insert subject line.
? Explain in the message why he or she needs to see Ann. What is so urgent?
? Explain when he or she will be back from lunch. Email 5-8f
? Give specifics concerning why a TQM team is needed.
? Specify when the team will meet. ? Specify when the individual should get back to the sender.
? Delete “smiley faces.” They are too casual.
Ann, need to see you this afternoon-urgent-get back with me as soon as possible- I’m at lunch now but will be awaiting for your response when i get back